The first Chapter.

I think that the first chapter was pretty long and it rambled alot about soe things. Overall i think the book will get better esp after one dude got shot in the head as soon as he finished taking a piss in the woods and how some people carry around severed fingers and shit, i think thats all cool and since it was in the first chapter then by the time im to the end of the book im feel like i would be very entertained,